Thứ Hai, 17 tháng 9, 2012

Entry1_ Lê Thị Nhàn


Entry1_Lê Thị Nhàn

Item1: Poem

I believe in a second chance

By Egyptian Heart

I believe that the sun shines after the rain
I believe if you don't get hurt you'll never gain
I believe in not doing things the easy way
I believe that being selfish doesn’t pay

I believe in a second chance
I believe in a life long romance
I believe there is life after death
And standing up to a life of mess

I believe in love at first sight
I believe that revenge isn’t right
I believe that first impressions last
And there is nothing better then a good laugh

I believe that dreams do come true, I believe there's destiny for me and you,
I believe something good comes from something bad I believe everyone has one true love



I believe there's destiny for me and you
I believe that good things come to those who wait
I believe love never arrives too late

I believe something good comes from something bad
I believe that for tears of happiness there are tears of sad
I believe everyone has a guardian angel
And the good you do will be rewarded well

I believe sometimes there is no explanation
I believe money can't buy people's affection
I believe you don't know what you've got until it's gone
I believe a new day arrives with every dawn

I believe a smile can be contagious
I believe in being very outrageous
I believe in living with no regrets
I believe that life is as good as it gets

I believe that God watches over us
I believe the little things are worth the fuss
I believe you have each friend for a reason
I believe you will get punished for treason

I believe that what comes first is family
I believe we should all live in harmony
I believe in making the most of a beautiful day
And it's not the end until everything's okay

I believe absence makes the heart grow fonder
I believe you will lose if you sit and wonder
I believe every experience teaches you a lesson
And nothing cures better then a drinking session

I believe everyone has one true love
I believe sometimes we need a little shove
I believe the whole world is a stage
I believe we only get better with age

I believe that to learn you have to live
I believe that to love someone you have to give
I believe one moment can change your life
And there's still help when you’re in strife

I believe everyone has one true friend
I believe love helps a broken heart mend
I believe in the power of a song
And things will change before too long

I believe living is the best experience
I believe in not laughing at other people’s expense
I believe it’s hard to watch a lover leave
And when they’re gone all you can do is breath

I believe to always look on the bright side
I believe that life is just one big ride
I believe when I die people will grieve
But it’s ok because I believe


+ Rhetorical devices:
-         Repetition: I believe
-         Climax: The belief is greater and greater in the last
-         Rhyme: rain- gain, way- pay, chance- romance, sight- right, last- laugh, bad- sad, wait- late, so on.
+ Message:
When everyone has his own good believes, even in difficulties, everything will be okay

Item 2: Short story
Sand and stone
Two friends Ismail and Ibrahim were walking through the desert, as the sun was beating down on their heads, and they were thirsty for water they began to argue. The argument got more and more heated and eventually Ismail struck Ibrahim across the face. Ibrahim felt hurt inside, but without anything to say, he wrote in the sand: "Today, my best friend slapped me in the face."

They kept on walking, until eventually they came across an oasis, where they decided to stop and bathe. Ibrahim jumped in and began to wash, while Ismail sat back and relaxed. Suddenly Ibrahim began to scream and shout, he had developed a cramp and was having difficulty keeping his head above water, he was drowning.

Ismail dived in after him, and brought him gently to shore. When Ibrahim recovered from the shock, he scratched a message on a nearby stone:

"Today, my best friend saved my life"

Ismail who had saved and slapped his best friend Ibrahim, asked him, "Why, after I hurt you, you wrote in the sand, and now you write on a stone?"

Ibrahim, smiled and replied:

"When a friend hurts us, we should write his deeds in the sand, where the winds of forgiveness can blow it away, and when a friend does something good, we should engrave it in stone, where it shall remain for eternity."


+ Rhetorical devices:
Parallelism: writing in the sand = easiness to forgive
                   Scratching on the stone = eternity of gratefulness
+ Message:
We should not remember things the others hurt us but things they help us.




Item 3: Cartoon




+ Rhetorical devices:
-         Metaphor: the fay- people who are conscious of protecting the environment
-         Overstatement: our environment is not polluted like that in fact
-         Irony
+ Message:
Our environment is being seriously polluted. Government as well as personality should give some solutions to save it



Item 4: picture






+ Rhetorical devices:
-         Pun: Gangnam style- Gangtây style- Gangbắc style- Gangđông style
+ Message:
The “GangNam style”  global phenomenon is widely popular




3 nhận xét:

  1. I think in the 2rd item, the rhetorical device is used here is metaphor because:
    + writing in the sand ~easy to delete~easy to forgive,
    + Scratching on the stone~hard to delete~long-lasting revenge

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  2. Item 3:
    Metaphor: images of smoke and domestic wastewater from factories in industrial areas and habitants as well - the reason why the environment has been polluted

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  3. First, you seem to have gone too far when including "governments" in the message of the third item. Just say "human beings should give some solution to it" instead of "Government as well as personality should give some solutions to save it".
    Second, in the last item, the message should be "GangNam style is more popular than the remaining" because Gangnam style is exactly a specific phenomenon, not just a name as you indicated in the quotation marks and Gangnam style is obviously more popular in comparison with the three remaining style, specifically. I mean, your message is too general.

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