Entry 1
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Original
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Item 1: Poem
You're my man, my
mighty king,
And I'm the jewel in your crown, You're the sun so hot and bright, I'm your light-rays shining down, You're the sky so vast and blue, And I'm the white clouds in your chest, I'm a river clean and pure, Who in your ocean finds her rest, You're the mountain huge and high, I'm the valley green and wide, You're the body firm and strong, And I'm a rib bone on your side, You're an eagle flying high, I'm your feathers light and brown, You're my man, my king of kings, And I'm the jewel in your crown. - Nima Akbari –
Rhetorical devices:
ü Rhyme: crown – down, chest- rest, wide- side,
brown- crown
ü Repetition: You're my man, my
king of kings
And I'm the jewel in your crown
(in the head of
part 1 and in the end of part 2)
You’re
I’m
And I’m
Message: The love of a girl for a boy is an
everlasting, faithful love which makes her want to stand by him for good
Item 2: Funny story
Mr.Knott is a teacher of a school
in London. It's a long way to his school from his house so he is usually tired
when he gets home.
One day, he got home, was tired as unasual. He was in bed when someone called him. He went downstairs, picked up the phone and said,' Hello. Who's speaking. please?' - Watt. - What's your name, sir? - Watt's my name. - Yes, I asked you that. What's your name? - I told you. Watt's my name. Are you Jack Smith? - No, I'm Knott. - Will you give me your name, please? - Will Knott. Both the men hanged up the phone angrily and thought,' What a stupid, rude man.'
Rhetorical devices:
ü Pun: Watt_
what, Knott_not, Will Knott_will not
Message: We should listen, analyze carefully, rapidly to
avoid the misunderstanding each other in the conversation (evenly in case, we
feel not good)
Item 3: Cartoon
Rhetorical devices:
ü Overstatement
( the Status of Liberty is being suck by flooding)
ü Irony
ü Metaphor: the
Status of Liberty( all of us) is afraid and need an emergency help
Message: Global
warming can lead to the melting of ice in the Poles which makes flooding in
cities, so we can have practical solution and activities to stop Global
warming.
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the addition of item 3:
Trả lờiXóaIrony about people's unconscious activities making global be more and more warm
- Item 3: You shouldn't add your thoughts in the message. The message should be: Global warming can melt the pole ice and raise the sea level, then lead to floods
Trả lờiXóai think that stopping Global Warming is a message which was written in the picture.it's not my personal thought
Trả lờiXóaDear Anh,
Trả lờiXóaIn item 2, I think you should add a rhetorical devices is that repetition ( What's your name?). This question is repeated many time made the story more humorous
After reading your entry, I have comment for you:
Trả lờiXóaIn the item 3: you should pay attention to some people in the picture. Metaphor: One person is sitting on the head of statue with his hands handed up and the other is hanging => Human beings will be in danger if not stop Global warming.
yes,,i think your comments are correct and i will add to my entry
Trả lờiXóathanks a lot
I think that, metaphor ( status of liberty- all of us) mentioned in item 3 as a rhetorical device is incorrect. You know, in the picture there are some people, so it can't be status of liberty-all of us( metaphor). i think status of liberty should be the world around us. and message is a warning to our the world about serious consequences of global warming is leading the smelting ice at the Poles and causing flood everywhere.
Trả lờiXóaMy dear friend. I have to say that you should think again about your last item. Its message should be " Global warming can lead to the melting of ice in the Poles which makes flooding everywhere."
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