Thứ Hai, 17 tháng 9, 2012

Entry 1 _ Trịnh Thị Trang

Item 1:  Short story
The Ugly Tree

Long, long ago, in a dense forest there were thousands of tall and beautiful trees. They were happy, but proud of themselves. Among them there also an ugly tree whose branches were badly twisted. Its roots had uneven curves. All the trees made fun of that ugly tree.

“How are you, hunchback?” the other trees always shouted and their laughter made the ugly tree feel sad. But, he never raised a voice against them. The ugly tree thought, “I wish I were as beautiful as the other trees. Why did God do this to me? Neither can I provide shade to the travelers not can the birds make their nests on me. Nobody needs me.”

One day, a woodcutter came to the forest. He took a look at the trees and said, “These trees are lovely. I must cut them.” As soon as he picked up his axe the trees became frightened.

‘Chop, Chop, Chop’ went the woodcutter’s axe and one by one the trees started to fall. “None of us is going to be spared,” screamed one of the beautiful trees. Soon that tree too was brought to ground by the woodcutter’s axe.

By now, the woodcutter had come near to the ugly tree. He had just raised his axe when suddenly he noticed how crooked the ugly tree was. “Hmm! This crooked tree seems to be useless for me. I cannot make long straight logs of this ugly tree,” he thought. And he moved towards another beautiful tree. The ugly tree heaved a huge sigh of relief. He realized that by making him ugly, God had actually given him a boon.

From that day the ugly tree never complained. He was happy with his crooked branches. He never forgot how he was spared from the woodcutter’s axe, only because he was crooked and ugly.

-     Rhetorical devices: metaphor (the ugly tree = the ugliness; the beautiful tree = the beauty)
-     Message:  The ugliness can be a boon which is helpful and brings good luck in some situation; and the beauty sometimes brings bad luck.


Item 2: Poem
Truth

Sticks and stones may break my bones,

But words can also hurt me.

Stones and sticks break only skin,

While words are ghosts that haunt me.


Slant and curved the word-swords fall

To pierce and stick inside me.

Bats and bricks may ache through bones,

But words can mortify me.


Pain from words has left its scar

On mind and heart that's tender.

Cuts and bruises now have healed;

It's words that I remember.

(By Barrie Wade)
-     Rhetorical devices:
+) parallelism: structure:
Sticks and stones may break my bones,

But words can also hurt me.

Stones and sticks break only skin,

While words are ghosts that haunt me”…
+) repetition:  “but words can…”, sticks and stones, stones and sticks…
+) overstatement: “words can hurt me”, “words are ghosts that haunt me”, “words can mortify me” …
+) simile: words-swords,...
-    Message: words can hurt people in many ways and never be healed like physical injuries.

Item 3: A cartoon:

                                 -     Rhetorical devices:
+) irony
+) overstatement
- Message: the price of gold is so high and there is now no way lowering it.

4 nhận xét:

  1. Nhận xét này đã bị tác giả xóa.

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  2. Nhận xét này đã bị tác giả xóa.

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  3. I think that
    In the 1st item:
    Rhetorical devices: metaphor (the ugly tree = the people whose lives have bad luck(not beautiful,handicapped...); the beautiful tree = the people whose lives are luckier)
    In the 2nd item: Message: words can spiritually hurt people and never be healed like physical injuries.

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  4. In my opinion, I really enjoy the poem "Truth", which I tended to choose as one of my three items at first.
    Also, I think you should make the rhetorical devices of your item 3 more clearly. How ironic? where is the overstatement?^^

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