Thứ Hai, 17 tháng 9, 2012

Entry 1_Nguyễn Thị Thúy


Entry 1_ Nguyn Th Thúy
Item 1: Poem
There is another sky
By Emily Dickinson
There is another sky,
Ever serene and fair,
And there is another sunshine,
Though it be darkness there;
Never mind faded forests, Austin,
Never mind silent fields -
Here is a little forest,
Whose leaf is ever green;
Here is a brighter garden,
Where not a frost has been;
In its unfading flowers
I hear the bright bee hum:
Prithee, my brother,
Into my garden come!

Rhetorical devices:
·        Rhyme:
-      imperfect rhyme: sky- sunshine, flowers- brother.
-      perfect rhyme: fair- there, green- been, hum- come.
·        Repetition: 
-      Never mind
-      Here is a
·        Symbol:
-      sunshine- belief and hope
-      darkness- the sorrows and difficulties in life
·        Metaphor:
-      “another sky, unfading flowers, the bright bee hum” – nice and positive things in life.
-       “faded forest, silent fields, frost” – the failures, sorrows and difficulties.
Message:  Each of them should live in hopeful and positive way as sorrows, failures and difficulties will go away if we live on the bright sides.


Item 2: Story
The Cookie Thief
A woman was waiting at an airport one night, with several long hours before her flight. She hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a bag of cookies and found a place to drop.
She was engrossed in her book but happened to see, that the man sitting beside her, as bold as could be. . .grabbed a cookie or two from the bag in between, which she tried to ignore to avoid a scene.
So she munched the cookies and watched the clock, as the gutsy cookie thief diminished her stock. She was getting more irritated as the minutes ticked by, thinking, “If I wasn’t so nice, I would blacken his eye.”
With each cookie she took, he took one too, when only one was left, she wondered what he would do. With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half.
He offered her half, as he ate the other, she snatched it from him and thought… oooh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he’s also rude, why he didn’t even show any gratitude!
She had never known when she had been so galled, and sighed with relief when her flight was called. She gathered her belongings and headed to the gate, refusing to look back at the thieving ingrate.
She boarded the plane, and sank in her seat, then she sought her book, which was almost complete. As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise, there was her bag of cookies, in front of her eyes.
If mine are here, she moaned in despair, the others were his, and he tried to share. Too late to apologize, she realized with grief, that she was the rude one, the ingrate, the thief.

Rhetorical devices:
·        Metaphor: the cookies- things we have possessed.
Message
Living is sharing. Let’s share things we get to each other to receive happiness. Also, do to others as you would have them do to you.

Item 3: Cartoon



Rhetorical devices
·        Irony:  the behaviors of the spouses when following other comments ridiculously.
·        Overstatement: there are not many other comments and the solution of the spouses like that.
·        Metaphor: the spouses- each of us; people giving comment- the whispers and comments of other people in our society
Message:
In our society, there are many people who are not consistent, do not keep their own idea firmly when accepting other comments.

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4 nhận xét:

  1. I think climax is another rhetorical device in item 2. The wondering of the woman is increased from the first to the last cookie.

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  2. in item 3, I think it may suitable with the message : Listen to your own and do in my way. Whatever and however you do, you will always be judged by other people.

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  3. Item 3: I partly agree with Trang but I think that the message should only be: Whatever you do, you will be judge by others

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  4. Item 1:There is one more rhetorical device you can add to:
    - Alliteration: + faded forest
    + bright bee

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